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Entry tags:fanfic: final fantasy x/x-2 ficbits

I—forgive me. For [livejournal.com profile] replica, who thought I had met my match! Behold, unbelieving one! Or—okay, just don't throw rotten vegetables at me? That'd—be good.

The Varying Degrees of Metallics (359 words)
Tidus, Isaaru (/?), G/worksafe
Believing in the dream.

He stood with his face pressed against the warm metal of the airship wall in a quiet room. Just five minutes, Tidus thought. Just five minutes to adjust, to accept—his fist met metal, over and over, hard and angry and useless. Tears burned his eyes and Jecht's voice burned his mind. Crybaby, Jecht whispered. Crybaby.

"No," Tidus said, squeezing his eyes shut. "Not Yuna."

He heard the movement behind him. It was too careful for Rikku but not quiet enough for Auron. The rustle of fabric over the molded metallic floor made him say, "Not now, Lulu." Eyes closed, breathing in the smell of the ship, in and out. "Please."

"I'm sorry."

Tidus jerked around to find Isaaru watching him. His face was a mask, the real weapon of summoners, Tidus thought. The ability to hide the truth and their feelings. "I thought you were sleeping?" Tidus said, aware his cheeks were streaked with tears. Crybaby. He held his head up.

Isaaru approached carefully. "You want Yuna to live," he said. Tidus felt Isaaru's hand touch his shoulder and flinched.

"Yes," said Tidus. "I want Yuna to live."

"If one summoner can't walk the path, another summoner will replace them." Isaaru's words were an echo of earlier. He shifted closer. "Do you think you can replace our summoners?"

It was hard to swallow. "I don't know," Tidus said, eyes hot. "I don't know." He froze when Isaaru leaned forward, his breath only warm against already flushed skin.

"She has her father in her," Isaaru said. "Can you find a way?"

Tidus stared over Isaaru's shoulder, palms slipping against the metal at his back. "I—what do you mean?"

He thought he felt the ghost of lips as Isaaru moved away. "Your dream," Isaaru said, eyes sad. "I fear it may come to pass."

Tidus floundered, reached out, pulled back with empty air grasped in his hands. "My dream?"

"Good luck," Isaaru said. "I hope you find your way to save Yuna's dream and yours."

He swept away, leaving Tidus with the smell of dust and burning.


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GLEE!
[identity profile] replica.livejournal.com
2007-01-07 11:31 pm UTC (link)
OMG. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I want to claw through the screen and huggle you and the fanfic and squish you close to my chest and smother you with love ♥ ♥

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now's not the time to mention the idea I had for Tidus/Isaaru X-2 fic, is it?
[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 12:05 am UTC (link)
Man, I—

I'm touched by your outpouring of love!

Glad you liked it. ;D ♥

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*spaz* I think I'd explode from sheer joy xD;
[identity profile] replica.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 12:10 am UTC (link)
I have to admit, I wasn't really sure if you'd actually do it, just cos it's so out there -- they barely interact in the game at all xD

But eee, you did and I'm bouncing around in happiness and love especially cos it's got a bit of angst which I'm a total sucker for and, and-- *flings more love*

Oh fandom, why must you write every other crack pairing but this one?

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I'll keep that in mind next time I tick you off (what, emotional blackmail is cool!)
[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 12:16 am UTC (link)
Wait a—

You know I ship Beclem and Chappu pretty hardcore? And Beclem and Yuna? And uh, Beclem with anyone at all? So out there means nothing! That's where I'm standing! I'm pretty sure the FFX/X-2 is preparing a series of nets to keep me away from all the sane people.

...I don't blame them.

That's what I ask when I'm staring at all the Auron/Rikku fics.

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But I can't recall you ever ticking me off yet :P
[identity profile] replica.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 12:49 am UTC (link)
Well, I didn't realize Beclem and Yuna, but I knew Beclem and Chappu. But since I never even finished X-2 and remember practically nothing of it anyways (except that endless comm sphere chapter, AUGH. and the evils of Via Infinito), I wouldn't really know how far out those pairings are ^^; I know, I know. One day I'll finish it and replay it. I just have a list of games to complete a mile long ;-;

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things could happen! like I could refuse to write seifer/zell ever again! Or--something.
[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 03:14 am UTC (link)
I have other friends making lists of the games they're going to finish/replay. I've tried having a list, but I'm no good at finishing one and moving on to the other. I want to skip around so much; it's probably why my memory for details sucks so bad.

(I think most people if they get far in X-2 will probably have nightmares about chapter four. I know I do.)

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I--I think I'd faint. And then commit pseuicide.
[identity profile] replica.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 03:18 am UTC (link)
well, my list isn't really to be followed in strict order... I just kind of try to loosely follow it, and I usually change my mind a million times during anyways xD

(Sadly I do too.)

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[identity profile] taydrcaagan.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 12:25 am UTC (link)
This is elegantly done with all the proper attributes in all the proper places. Both Tidus and Isaaru are fully in character. I would never have thought of this sort of interaction between the two but it works and illuminates the both of them. The touches of sound and sensation are very well handled and add to the general effect. You have managed to pack a great deal of meaning and information into few words and do it extremely well. Brava!

I particularly like this passage: " the real weapon of summors, Tidus thought. The ability to hide the truth and their feelings" It shows considerable insight into the psychology of the Summoners.

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[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 02:54 am UTC (link)
Thank you for your investment in my characterizations. I've never really written either of these characters before, so it's good to hear they worked. Tidus, especially, comes hard for me, so I'm glad I didn't mangle him.

I appreciate your words very much. :D

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I'm not coming out until the stupid people have gone away.  ....I can wait all day.

[personal profile] lassarina
2007-01-08 02:44 am UTC (link)
Typo: "the real weapon of summors" should be "the real weapon of summoners."

Otherwise, GLEE.

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[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 02:49 am UTC (link)
Yay, thank you. ♥

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[identity profile] siva630.livejournal.com
2007-01-08 07:07 pm UTC (link)
I HATE IT~ (with love)

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[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-24 07:00 am UTC (link)
Thanks.

I GUESS.

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[identity profile] delladella.livejournal.com
2007-01-09 02:48 am UTC (link)
Oh em gee. You made me feel sorry for Tidus! How in the world did you do that? Skillz, I tell you. SKILLZ.

This was good. Seriously.

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Re: !
[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-24 07:03 am UTC (link)
If you keep feeding my ego, I'm going to write some original fic (BADLY) and dedicate it to you! And cite the scandalous stories you've told me about yourself as inspiration!

Hee hee. Thanks, though! I FEEL SORRY FOR TIDUS ALL THE TIME. But I feel sorry for any characters with Daddy issues. BASICALLY, I'm a sap. I'm okay with that.

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blast from the past!
[identity profile] delladella.livejournal.com
2007-01-24 09:56 pm UTC (link)
Shhh. I MEAN, WHAT SEKRITS?

I don’t really dislike Tidus, but his VA didn’t quite work out for me. We’ll just keep it at that.

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ROFFLE
[identity profile] bottle-of-shine.livejournal.com
2007-01-24 09:57 pm UTC (link)
I once got dog piled for calling his VA a hack. BEWARE.

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Re: ROFFLE
[identity profile] delladella.livejournal.com
2007-01-24 10:04 pm UTC (link)
OH NOEZ, did I just have an opinion?

Fansplosions ensue!

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