HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO FEEL GOOD ABOUT ANY OF MY WRITING WHEN I READ YOUR STUFF, HUH? HUH?
I'm panting here, that was so hot. No, really. And as others have said, I love your Baralai here. Your Gippal is amazing, too, but Baralai... In the game, they only showed little pieces of each of his layers. You have pieced together all these layers and woven them into a tapestry. You have his joking side, his strength which nobody sees at first and I don't know why, his cunning-plotting-genius-politician side, and (my favorite) his sexy side.
The line He tasted like the tea he loved so much... is so perfect. So, so perfect I want to take it home with me and give it its own little pillow.
You have made a flu-ridden, exhausted Dior very, very, happy.
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I'm panting here, that was so hot. No, really. And as others have said, I love your Baralai here. Your Gippal is amazing, too, but Baralai... In the game, they only showed little pieces of each of his layers. You have pieced together all these layers and woven them into a tapestry. You have his joking side, his strength which nobody sees at first and I don't know why, his cunning-plotting-genius-politician side, and (my favorite) his sexy side.
The line He tasted like the tea he loved so much... is so perfect. So, so perfect I want to take it home with me and give it its own little pillow.
You have made a flu-ridden, exhausted Dior very, very, happy.
Also, CIRCLING WOLVES, OHGODYES!